It is being increasingly acknowledged that the happiness level of citizens in a country is a vital measurement when it comes to measuring the success of a government. However, the controversial topic of whether this is more important than the national economic growth never fails to attract the public attention. As far as I am concerned, I tend to be the advocate in respect of this issue.
People who emphasize the importance of economic growth index are primarily focusing on the idea that money is fundamental for all people. This is to say, without decent amount incumbent, the government will not have enough resources for the infrastructure of cities such as building roads. Nevertheless, this argument cannot hold water. This is because every individual is the essential components of a country instead of money. This is to say, a government’s ultimate goal is to increase every citizen’s quality of life.
It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that how joyful that citizens are is more important than how much economic growth that a country has. Money is just a tool to achieve a better life. For instance, a billionaire who needs to travel around the world and has no time for his or her family is not necessarily happier a normal person who enjoys spending time on things that he or she likes. Hence, the happiness level plays a more critical role in the measurement of the success of a country.
In a nutshell, we can safely reach the conclusion that making everyone in the society happier should be the ultimate goal and therefore we should pay more attention to it, despite the fact that economic growth is also extremely crucial in terms of achieving this goal.
- Is experiential learning (learning by doing) a better approach as compared to formal education. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- Which one is better, Textbook library or new digital material in university. The role of a library in keeping books is obsolete. So universities should use digital media. What is your opinion? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. 75
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree? 77
- The government should create a better network of public transport available for everyone or build more roads owning population 87
- Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work? 72
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91319444444 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94760173687 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8401222984 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233365187826 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745717120161 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068902448323 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135342425752 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644601581324 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.