“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children. Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children’s life, or should the mother be solely responsible?
For many decades, paradigm of perfect woman according to the society was the women who take care of their children. However, this contemporary society has started to acknowledge the contribution of women beside their household duties. This change in view has given rise to the question whether men share equally responsibility with women when it comes to raising their children or women is solely responsible. This essay will discuss why it is important to share the responsibility of upbringing of the children.
Both the men and women play crucial part in the life of the children. Child may get necessary warmth and love from the mother, and traits and skill which is necessary from to be social from the dad. For instance, it is very normal in western society for a dad to give his young one a driving lesson when the time is right. This type of interaction is very essential for the strong bond between dad and his children.
Similarly, if the men of the house make their presence felt in the life of their children it is very likely that their children’s life will be stable. There are many cases where the children life has ruined because of the lack of the proper direction from the father.
This essay discussed why it is critical for the men of the house to share the responsibility with the women of the house in the upbringing of their children. In my opinion men should share the responsibility and make their presence fell in their children life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
.... This change in view has given rise to the question whether men share equally responsibility with w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74609375 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68108507196 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4765625 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3591793879 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.25 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184132078604 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776305488738 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444372236414 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114038412016 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048513856314 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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