Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?

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Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?

Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that it is more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of life is one of the biggest issues which people are facing. Some people believe that it is important to balance work and life, others would argue that hard working now is for a comfortable personal life in the future. As far as I am concerned, achieving a balance between job and other aspects of life is important, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.

It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that a balance between work and personal life is very important for maintaining employees' work efficiency, which is obvious because appropriate rest can release heavy pressure of work, thus improves working efficiency. To further support the above statement, yesterday I spent three hours struggling on completing my essay, but after having 30 minutes break I got an idea then completed it.

Nevertheless, because of low salary and high cost of living, it is hard to achieve a balance between work and other aspects of life. The main justification of this view is that due to the consumer price index rises continuously and increasing cost of living, people have to spend more long time earning more money to maintain living standards. This can be established by a recent study by Oxford University which stated that 76% of people just desire to sleep after hard work.

In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract public attention, we may safely reach the conclusion that a balance between work and other aspects of life is important but difficult to be achieved.

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Average: 7.9 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01090909091 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79273200757 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.111111111 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.9669160288 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384931967107 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178315803289 0.0925447433944 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107579311196 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241111999284 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104863056367 0.0609392437508 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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