Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.

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Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.

In these days, people often take a variety of viewpoints when it comes to most daily life issue. To give an illustration, while many people believe that they are spending too much time at work such that they are left with little time for their own personal life, other holds the opinion that this is not the case. This essay offers some insights in favor of the former outlook.

There are a number of reliable grounds to support the belief that people allocate most of their time working rather than enjoying themselves. First and foremost, people believe that they can earn a great deal of income if they are hard-working and therefore, would be able to improve their living standard. This is true especially for low income families in which parents have to do multiple jobs to get additional income. As such, they can bring up their children properly. Without a stable income, it can be argued that people may fail to meet the living standard and become bankrupt due to increasing expenditure such as school fee and bills.

In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that the skyrocketing cost of living is one of the major reasons that forces people to work harder and harder. There is no doubt that people desire to earn as much as possible. As such, they work at their utmost in order to get promoted by their employers and subsequently, receive an increased salary. To give an illustration, Japanese are famous for their hard-working culture because they desire to get rich and climb high in the social ladder.

In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that people are spending more time working rather than enjoying themselves.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83680555556 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48670994883 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1911635495 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411044963368 0.242375264174 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128086794341 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110369377218 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241825714604 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729748795964 0.0609392437508 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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