The problems of people spend too much time on work than their personal life has been increasing at exponential rates. It is argued that this trend affects the health of the employees. These problems often challenge the integrity of business. The virtue of this argument has certain drawbacks that cannot be ignored. I strongly agree the people spend too much time on office will effects negatively on personal life. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing the argument in various perspectives.
Firstly, it is believed that these problems primarily result from the increasing competitive work environment and every organization need different and new ideas have been added for job security. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered this phenomenon can improve living incomes. Thus, the example clearly indicates the root cause of the issue.
To continue further, another common criticism of the topic is that, families are getting separated as the people cannot spend quality time with their partners as well children feel neglected due to this they can addicted with bad company. This also directly effect on employee efficiency and productivity rate. One of the excellent strategies to address the issue is by implementing work model and shift model can balance the work as well personal life without any tension.
In conclude, I concede that people spend too much time of office then their personal life plays an integral part in the overall development of company. I would strongly recommend that company should find solution to limit the working hours as employees plays a vital role in a company’s success and profitability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: effect
...ople spend too much time on office will effects negatively on personal life. In this es...
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Suggestion:
...eriment which discovered this phenomenon can improve living incomes. Thus, the ex...
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Suggestion: addict
...ren feel neglected due to this they can addicted with bad company. This also directly ef...
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...well personal life without any tension. In conclude, I concede that people spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23655913978 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79320723445 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5417364998 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345581662466 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103319657385 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147044792786 0.071462118173 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188777324906 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957478428 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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