Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
Recently the phenomenon of spending too much time at work has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question, “is over staying at work beneficial for the personal life?” Whereas, it is a widely held view that spending additional time at work may hamper professional and personal life. I will discuss the controversial aspects of spending extra time in office work throughout this essay.
In terms of career prospect, a huge number of qualified people against limited number of work places makes the corporate recruitment most challenging; therefore, professionals need to give extra time and effort to ensure their sustainability in the company. Furthermore, to meet the customers’ demands, executives need to complete the deal on time even at the cost of their valuable family time. For instance, as a professional engineer, I need to work day and night without any time limit once project handover date is nearby.
Despite the inevitability of the fact, over working causes a lot of physical crisis such as depression, insomniac, back pain etc. which may affect the personal life as well as the working life. Additionally, due to spending less time with family, the bonding among family members gets loosen which may leads to even separation between couples. Children who do not get proper attention from their working parents are gone astray in often cases.
Therefore, the employers must develop balanced work-life policy to ensure their employees’ healthy life, as employees are the backbone of the business. We also should be careful to maintain our work life harmony, and I believe, this is the only way to make our happy professional and personal life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87719273809 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8218445044 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417949035704 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145614401364 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949015368397 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240568790218 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114906206898 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87719273809 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8218445044 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417949035704 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145614401364 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949015368397 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240568790218 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114906206898 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.