Nowadays TV has become a essential part of life, and a bridge to spread news and awareness and for some it act like a companion. What is your openion about this?
The important of nowdays tv become an essential part of life to spread news and awerness, which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substansial effect of nowdays TV become more essential parts of life to spread news and awarness has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of these trend in recent year. In my opinion it can be agree that, TV has playing vital role in our daily life for recational development and professional development.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why TV become an essential part of our lives but the most conspicious on stem"s from the fact that TV helps to upgrate our knowledge, skills and makes our lives easier. As an illustration, TV gives weather report every day which helps people to plan of work. In addition, TV provide health education for people for example TV cast advertisment about handwashing. Thus, TV become essential part of life to spread news and awerness to development of people idea, experience and thoughts.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that TV helps to improve the science and technology and give information about polticies. For instance, TV is benificial for house wifes, old people and children. Therefore, it helps to built family relationship.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of TV has become an essential part of life, and a bridge to spread news and awerness and for some it acts like a companion is prominent and TV programme is chepest one which can affort by all people. It will provides news about disaster, music, movie and news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96323529412 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8114016502 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0653871435 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433713251122 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15529349468 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106276681683 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266968256805 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104371504754 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.