Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. It is a medium to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, whether TV programs are considered to be a great companion to humans or not, has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. Although contested by many that TV can be beneficial, a substantial number of individuals hold an opposite view. In my opinion, I am convinced that TV is a great medium to both educate and entertain people due to educational and psychological reasons.
First and foremost, it has been argued that the educational reason is why I think programs broadcast on media can keep individuals updated of latest news and current affairs around the globe. Tv can provide the target audience with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that weather forecasting and increasing knowledge and skills are inextricably bound up. For example, a well-known American scientist once said," documentaries, natural-science and other educational programs play a pivotal role in broadening people's horizons", which had a significant impact on my belief. Hence, the beneficial ramifications of boosting intellectual abilities as well as enhancing the learning process of viewers apparently can be seen.
Moreover, another factor that should be considered is the psychological factor, which in other words, TV acts as a companion to human becoming an indispensable part of life. For instance, some research conducted in Melbourne University has asserted that individuals who turn to watching their favourite movies or series on TV, will feel less pressure and anxiety in their daily basis. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of being a great source of entertainment and amusement.
To recapitulate, I am inclined to believe that TV programs can not only increase people's awareness but also can make them laugh and give them pleasure due to educational and psychological reasons. Authorities should make a concerted effort to provide the best programs to the target audience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4262295082 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24395371258 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2460315504 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.916666667 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154810480519 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510529767909 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519628668801 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904942868681 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523959947161 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.