It is irrefutable to say that, TV play pivotal role in every body life all around the world. I am inclined that TV is the most important mass media in people's life. In this essay I will illustrate some advantages and disadvantageous of TVs.
On the one hand, there are several reason way TV has most influance on people's life. first and foremost is that,Tv is the cheapest and reachable media for people globally. Fore exampel, in the furrest rular areas in Tabat or Africa you can see a TV set in people's home. As a result, govrnments an broadcast organizations can shair their ideas and programmes for them. in addition, producers by advertising their products in TV are able to sell their goods more easily, so the more sell products by componies, the more job opportunities we have all around the world. Furthermore, Tv progromma is a free educational system which governments can rise public awarnesses about global issues. hence, people are more interested to use TV in their daily lives.
On the other hand, many people argued that watching TV is wasting time. Fore example, a group of social reserchers of Harvard University conducted a survey on two different groups who spent three hours a day watching Tv channel and a group who never see TV. The result revealed that the first group were four times more likely fail in their lessons at university. The relationsheep between two groups was statistically significant. Hence, watvhing TV cause distract student at studing their lessons.
In a nutshell,although there are many benefits to watching Tv, in my point of view I believe that people should spend thier time to reading books rather then wastinh their time watching TV channel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'TVs'?
Suggestion: TVs
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Suggestion: , Tv
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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Suggestion: , although
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92361111111 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82566363886 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3568016938 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129081433971 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483190890832 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240033125261 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791447701231 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029433993597 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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