Online shopping

Essay topics:

Online shopping

Shopping through internet is becoming a common practice now a days and due to which local businessmen are suffering. Local purchasing or either online shopping, both options has their own pros and cons.

In this modern era people are eager to find things online within seconds by the help of new technology and this let them to avoid the hassle of local purchasing. Lots of advantages that includes, people do not have to rush to market to waste their time or money in terms of fuel. Rather than, they prefer to go online and find whatever they like through famous online shopping websites. For example Amazon and best buy are one of the big examples all over the world.

On the other side people, who are not much aware about internet and unable to use online shopping can experience loss of money and the reason is they cannot evaluate the quality and cost conditions i.e. logistic cost and taxes. Local purchasing gives you an edge to evaluate items with your naked eye on the spot.

In my opinion due to fast life and numbers of variety in markets, peoples are declined toward online shopping, which is quite a smart development with lots of key benefits and which are helpful in our daily life. I have experienced a lot of shopping through online system and saved money in a smart way.

In conclusion, online shopping has far more impact on local businesses, which are decreasing due to this online facility that brings the desired items on your doorstep.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... internet is becoming a common practice now a days and due to which local businessmen are ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smart way" with adverb for "smart"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g through online system and saved money in a smart way. In conclusion, online shopping has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73929961089 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36452968278 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1875820142 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392120143099 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149293115315 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134044947037 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234392414924 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647482959993 0.0609392437508 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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