There is no need for newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no need for newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world the requirement of newspaper is no more, which is the topic of this essay and on what level i agree or disagree is the specific question. Critics must be disagreeing with this but in my opinion i am fully agreed for this need of newspaper even in modern world. Implications based on my views are discussed in details are below.

Due to the passage of time technology is changing its shape gradually and rapid pace of life really impact these new changes. Newspaper is one of the most common habit in people, specially when people are so habitat on reading the newspaper at breakfast table just after waking up. Might be it is due to some thoughts that reading in early morning really helps to memorize.

But now with the changes in technology as we discussed above, new innovations like computer reading is stepping in our lives. People instead of reading newspaper prefer to read news on their computer through internet to avoid the hassle of going in to the library and to save their time.

However it is quite a modern approach but ultimately it have various disadvantages and health risk, For example reading newspaper with not just headlines but details with naked eyes really impact our eye sight, because who like to get through the news details and read more deeply really effected.

On other side my preference is on reading through traditional ways of reading news by newspaper for which purposed newspapers really published through a process.
Finally in my opinion, reading news paper sometimes through internet is OK, but that should not be a practice because technology cannot overcome on each traditions.

In conclusion, the necessity of newspaper can never be obsolete due to overcoming of new innovations.

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Average: 7.9 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94256756757 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64949095473 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2450978217 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200553466326 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791984420509 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112682751899 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929265206995 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118850357606 0.0609392437508 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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