parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of the behavior of children and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that poor upbringing is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that aggressive behavior can be a plus, and
I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From carefree childhood standpoint, troubled childhood can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that misbehavior, as well as unlawful behavior, are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which deciphered to abdicate your responsibility. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both child responsibility and child abuse can be seen.
Within the realm of the modern family, alcoholic parents might increase the consequences of street crimes. Moreover, the fundamental essence of the high rates of juvenile crimes delinquency relates to this reality that the demerits of family support pertain to dysfunctional behavior. As a tangible example, a scientific research that undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the burden of responsibility is correlated negatively with the violent computer game. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of to turn to crime.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of patents modeling far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of social training prove the significance of social interaction, but also pinpoint being affected by mass media implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65648854962 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29278505594 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671755725191 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0374513909 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105979987161 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032405199951 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293349584639 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437925752325 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290519948256 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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