Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Being a parent comes to a great sense of responsibilities towards the child. It is duty of every parents to discipline their children. Parents are their first mentor, role model or teacher so in my view, parents should be held legally responsible for children’s acts and parents are entitled to monitor themselves and educate their children on what is right and wrong. This essay will discuss in detail that parents are responsible for children’s acts.
To commence with, being a first mentor and role model, and children’s first education start from their home that’s why parents should teach children about moral value and our responsibility towards individual or society. They should also teach them about basic but lifelong learnings from their tender age like be kind to others, respect people irrespective of their economic standard, watch your words. These might be small things but will have a great impact on their life at every stage. therefore, being first teacher of their kids’ parents should help them to be a good human being.
To continue with, it is said that Children are like sponge they absorb and imitate whatever they observe so parents should watch their behaviour, words and actions. In a developing age, a child learns language, culture and manners by observing their parents and imitate them. For instance, my nephew doesn’t abuse and fight with other kids because my sister is always use respectful words. Thus, being their role model, parents should be responsible for their kids.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that parents should not only teach their children about moral values and discipline but they also should watch their own words and actions towards other front of children. I think, parents are solely responsible for children’s actions because their education begin from home itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32333333333 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73132243103 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7885680042 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423982450678 0.242375264174 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175545807891 0.0925447433944 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113497285147 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29785686983 0.151781067708 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120128027573 0.0609392437508 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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