Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts, to what extent do you agree or disagree?
This issue raises a controversy about parents should be legally responsible for their children’s acts. The point of contention calls for it is analysis by various perspectives. However, it is evident that parents should be a good example for their children.
At the outset, there are several reasons why it can be stated that parents are the model for kids. The first being that children like to copy everything that parents do, your attitudes, things that you speak they like to repeat, the clothes that parents use. Furthermore, a critical element of this is if parents are bad example inside of home it is probably going to reflect on the children’s education. To cite an example on the matter, alcoholic parents, parents that discuss and fight in front of the kids.
On the other hand, some people adopt an opposite view and tend to believe that the teachers and grandparents could share the responsibilities. Correspondingly, it is crucial to note that some behaviors that kids started presenting there are nothing to do with the education that the parents give at home. Moreover, this idea is well supported by the fact that children started living in a society and sometimes parents cannot have all the time to educate your kids. Thus, a clear example of this in practice is in Brazil I used to work more than twelve hours per day and sometimes I just saw my son after the dinner time.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that parents hold the responsibilities for children’s education. However, as every garden as some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoping to heighten their intellect.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03597122302 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9951913569 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6416802561 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342672840096 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127478054879 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130962024174 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220272443341 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139481545678 0.0609392437508 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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