Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold, To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s competitive world, certainly advertisement helps producers to not only stay in competition but also increase revenue by increasing number of sales as companies spend a huge amount on these advertisements to attract consumers by every feasible way. I agree that Ads help consumers to choose the best goods and services among others but they actively interfere their desires and developing artificial needs. This essay will discuss both perspectives of advertisement.
To commence with, for producers, ads play a key role to helping them to boost up companies’ revenue by high sale of goods as their products are attracting consumers by every conceivable way by having all eye-catchy visuals, quirky slogans and best deals. For example, iPhone 6 now is easily available on best price with more payment options on both online websites and stores after iPhone 7 or later version’s launch. That’s beneficial to producer to sale the old stock but this may be unnecessary for buyers.
To continue with, Though, Adverts help buyers to get best deal on goods and services from availability, but influence their decisions to end up buying up something unnecessary. For instance, we bought a silly device for decreasing weight last month. The seller claimed in two months everyone can lose weight appropriately. This company knows the importance of losing weight in the consumer's mind and by this assumption push us to buy it, even though that claim was completely a lie.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that advertisement serves their purpose to attract more consumers and widely contributes in sales after spending high expenses by producers and helps buyers to get updated about new products and services. In my opinion, ads interfere the buyer’s decision of their necessity and developing artificial needs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37542662116 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05159918215 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6853951401 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117376157751 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395118228702 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437345504233 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760456494827 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433306612345 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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