Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Being a parent comes to a great sense of responsibilities towards the child. It is duty of every parents to discipline their children. As parents are their first mentor, role model or teacher so in my view, parents should be held legally responsible for children’s acts and parents are entitled to monitor and educate their children on what is right and wrong, individually and socially. This essay will discuss in detail that parents are responsible for children’s acts.
To commence with, Parents should be aware of their children acts or actions. It is quite often that children can cause harm to someone whether intentionally or unintentionally. In that case, it should be parents’ responsibility towards to the other person. Even if the harm is accidental, consequence can vary from minor to serious. Sometimes parents are also liable to pay hefty amount for their child’s act. For example, my brother accidentally injured a classmate so my parents compensated the family with his medical bills. So, parents should be legally bound for kids’ actions.
To continue with, it is said that Children are like sponge they absorb and imitate whatever they observe. For instance, in a developing age, a child learns language, culture and manners by observing their parents. So, if parents speak in an abusive way. It is most likely to observed by child and imitate their words. If parents respect their elders and love to younger then it will be most likely observed by children and imitate in their actions. Therefore, parents are responsible for their kid’s language.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that parents should teach their children about moral values and kindness, even they should watch their own words and actions towards other front of children. I think, parents are solely responsible for children’s actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31333333333 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97246624128 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5481971089 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465879801759 0.242375264174 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172484619706 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132560410707 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328567193165 0.151781067708 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130684527803 0.0609392437508 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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