Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on whether parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, parents are responsible for children act. Through the course of this essay, I shall put forth my points and calculations by considering both sides of the argument.
There are number of reasons in favor of my viewpoint. One of them is that children spend most of their time with their parents and learn many lessons of life from them. This is because if parents failed to fulfill this duty then they should be held legally for children's act. It is important to note that parents have legal responsibility of upbringing child and they cannot avoid that. It can also be observed that in American legal system, many parents punished for child's behavior.
There are a few aspects on parenting that need special mentioning. Firstly, it is said that children are very close to parents and parents closely monitors child's growth. Then there are cases where parents are pretty much aware of positive and negative side of child. For example, many terrorists come from such families that in which parents do not have any control on child.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided and hence my opinion is that parents are responsible for children's act and should be held legally. I am inclined to believe that parents play critical and vital role in child's upbringing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06343283582 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80123001895 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6019186116 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406693359947 0.242375264174 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133661552558 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103956766616 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255411308989 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756172317345 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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