Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Nowadays, whether parents should be held accountable for their children’s action has attracted many controversies and drawn the attention of the general public. Some people claim that children make their own decisions therefore, it is unfair for parents to take the full blame, whereas others believe that children learn their values and behavior through their parents therefore, parents should hold full responsibility towards any of their children’s misconduct. This essay will be discussing both merits and demerits of this issue and lead to a plausible conclusion.
To see a child succeed in life is every parent’s dream. Undoubtedly, every parent would try to provide the best environment and education, and would try to raise their kids with good values and beliefs. However, childrens have their own thoughts, parents could only wish the best for their children to become a benevolent person and not a liability to society.
On the other hand, it is the parents who share the honors when their children win a competition or perform well academically. Moreover, parents should correct the child’s behavior if the child performs any ethically incorrect actions. Therefore, it is the parents’ duty to raise their kids to become righteous people.
In conclusion, no one can alter another person’s actions or thoughts, even when it comes to the topic of parenting. Personally, I am more inclined towards that parents should be accountable for any of their children’s misbehavior, however, society should also be more understanding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...oversies and drawn the attention of the general public. Some people claim that children make t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44214876033 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94527239236 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3934607657 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357361939018 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13052471689 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871990123911 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217693511689 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600299868781 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.