In the past 100 years, there are many important inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of the past century? Why?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to antibiotics, airplanes and computers. While it is possible to claim that the airplane and antibiotics as the best invention, my point of view that the computer is the most important item that the human being had discovered. In this essay, I shall analyze different sides of the argument to a certain extent.
First and foremost, there are myriad of benefits the modern nations can gain from the computer such as confidentiality, integrity, availability, life quality, security, portability, and life encapsulation. For example, owner of a computer can keep its data and information with high confidentiality. Therefore, it is considered that the new digital computer as the best item that the any species have discovered on this globe.
On the other hand, those who believed the other sides of the argument trust that the antibiotics and airplanes as the best products and services for us. For example, there are variety of drugs on the world, and they help us to improve our health. Therefore, it is accepted that the best discover as the antibiotics by some people. But computer technologies aid most of the modern medical researches, and without a computer the airplane and the medicine have not any rapid growth.
In conclusion, it is trusted that the computer, internet, smart phones and robotics are the future of the civilization. In nutshell, it is strongly believed that the governments and professionals should implement policies and procedures for the improvement of the computers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20532319392 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06700603927 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1318994627 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802758563409 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256147825694 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334635715903 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470518346712 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395748781089 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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