In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and negative effects on society due to new innovations such as air plane, antibiotics and computer technologies. While it is possible to claim that the air plane and antibiotics are the best inventions in the world, my point of view that the advantages of the computer outweigh the other advantages of other inventions. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analyse the different sides of invention technologies in a scientific way.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages that the computer presents to the human bean such as integrity, availability, usability, availability, confidentiality, quality, security, portability, and efficiency. For instance, nowadays every person have a portable computer at there hand such as Android or IOS. Therefore, it is believed that the computer is the most familiar and the most important innovation.
On the other hand, those who believe that the antibiotics or air plane as the most important innovation have a different point of view and say efficiency point of view those two items are playing a major role. But, there are lots of plane crashes and side effects have for the human bean from those items. Therefore, it is considered that the air planes and antibiotics have more risks for a nation.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that the scientific point of view computer as the major item that helps for many production lines and individuals. In nutshell, governments and professionals must take cognitive actions to overcome the minimum hazards related to computers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a scientific way" with adverb for "scientific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...fferent sides of invention technologies in a scientific way. First and foremost, there are myria...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22348484848 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03304563389 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7257462447 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102781058946 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439098931394 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237236499441 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634810856385 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157737485874 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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