In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
The past decade has gigantic inventions in the area of medicine,transportation and information technologies.We have witnessed astonishing discoveries in the fields of antibiotics ,the airplanes and the computers ,amount all the innovations and inventions.I believe, the invention of computers is the game changing and almost touched everyone in the civilization.
To begin with,there are plethora advantages of computerization.First,it impacted both societies and economic activities.We can imagine hardly without computers.Computers with the help of software have made human life easy due to its ability of doing multitasking ,computing and the quick search feature. Digital transformation helped in bringing vast changes in all the areas including hospitality,transport,manufacturing ,automobile production industries and many more.Moreover,recent development in the artificial intelligence and machine learning have given mammoth scope in the automation which mundane task with robotics.
On the other hand, there are negligible detrimental effects of computer usage.In many cases, it has led to the issues of unemployment .Furthermore, people became lazy and sedentary .For example, sitting long hours on computer system causes severe physical and psychological problems and epidemics.
To recapitulate ,among the inventions for the past 100 years ,the computer has paramount role when compared to the inventions in the filed of antibiotics ,airplane and many more which are highly dependent on computing and calculations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in many cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24528301887 5.00649968141 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32873942945 2.71678728327 159% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669811320755 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.57093596059 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.5024630542 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1970872757 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 264.8 104.977214359 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.4 20.9669160288 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6 7.25397266985 270% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.33497536946 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163387212324 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906401170217 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904360557135 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109577703482 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919080144799 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 12.6369458128 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.99 53.1260098522 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.9458128079 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.86 11.5310837438 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.13 8.32886699507 146% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 9.94827586207 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.3980295567 181% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.5123152709 219% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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