People usually mix their private and professional life.What are the pros and cons

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People usually mix their private and professional life.What are the pros and cons

Some people believe that it is appropriate to mix private and professional life together, because they think that there is a connection between them. They say that one helps the other somehow. However, others agree that combining private and professional life has the tendency of messing everything up, hence we must split them up. In my opinion, there are pros and cons of mixing them.
First of all, when we bring private and professional up, we tend to talk over with our spouses about some inklings which may help us in the professional environment. They can help us to catch swift solutions to difficult problems. This leads towards the betterment of our professional lives and we become fathomable about the work environment issues.
However, it is unlikely to bring our private life to the professional environment; no-one / no one will be able to provide any help because no one knows what happens in our private lives. It is up to ourselves to comprehend and discuss with our partners the strives happening in our lives.
Finally, bringing professional life into the private environment, one may somewhat function, but the opposite may not always works; it depends on the circumstances and moments.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85903910455 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7498743717 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264968047174 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103746835 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908085135655 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153078955487 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826941489466 0.0609392437508 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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