Polygamy has increased widely in this modern and brutal life. How far do you agree with this statement?
Since ancient times, polygamy, the practice of plural marriage has been widely accepted among different societies worldwide. Surprisingly in this modern time, it is more popular than ever. I fully agree with the statement “Polygamy has increased widely in this modern and brutal life” and in this essay, I lay down reasons supporting my viewpoint with relevant examples.
The voices supporting the marriage of one man to two or more women has gained momentum in this modern era. But what could be the reason behind this sudden spike in polygamy’s popularity? I sight low education rate and unemployment, the reasons behind this widespread practice.
In the light of ancient tradition and culture, people are following polygamy in this modern society. Polygamy can also be seen as a status symbol in modern societies. Money, religion, and status influence people to choose polygamy.
An American television drama series “Big Love” is about a family that practices polygamy. It received widespread critical acclaim throughout its run. Its popularity evidence that polygamy has found a place in American pop culture society. I can think polygamy as a dark horse, which is slowly crossing the winning line. From being a gray issue to becoming a practice that is more popular than ever.
Seeing the rate of change in support of practice, polygamy will soon be legalized in the United States in spite of social concerns. In conclusion, many factors like money, social status, culture are influencing polygamy and today we can see more and more males and females diverted to this path.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28793774319 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77349216288 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0416425819 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9375 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303363919332 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904022349849 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111216408381 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169567765613 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130191854742 0.0609392437508 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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