Polygomy has increased widely in this modern and brutal life? How far do you agree with this statement.

Polygamy has widely increased in some countries in these modern era. Some people think polygamy effects the women's life than men and some others think it is a tradition it must be followed in their countries as well as their religion. However, I strongly disagree with polygamy and I will explain throughout this essay.

To begin with, there are several potential drawbacks involved in polygamy can be barely overlooked. The most dreaded danger involved in this is men's are treating their women as slaves it is not good for better family relationships. Moreover, polygamy tests the status of the men. For example, spending expenses for home needs and schooling their children needs more money. Furthermore, it decreases the name of a person in society.

On the other hand, some people think polygamy is their religion belief it must be followed. For instance, most of the Arab and Islamic religion based countries follows it.

Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and going by my opinion I will state in conclusion that, polygamy degrades the men's name in society and it is not all good for women's life.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 191.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96335078534 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56097484249 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3213285596 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.25397266985 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921892841857 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399643790519 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052414209468 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526283651757 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512776019489 0.0609392437508 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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