In recent years, obesity rates around the world have increased dramatically. Do you agree with the idea that parents who let their children become obese should be criminally charged and punished?
Rapid increase in the rate of obesity in last few years has created debate among people, some people believe that parents should be held responsible for their obese children and therefore, should be punished and criminally charged where as some people think otherwise. This essay will discuss why parents should be criminally charged and punished if their children are obese.
To begin, obesity has become normal in this contemporary society. The main reason for obesity is the intake of high calorie fast food and lack of exercise which could be easily kept in check by the parents if they want. But, rather than living healthy life, modern parents encourage consumption of fast food for their convenience. For example, in America parents incline towards fast food because they do not want to waste their precious time in cooking food. Therefore, in this type of situation if child is obese then responsibility lies on parents and they should be punished and criminally charged as they are fully capable of stopping their child from being obese.
In addition, it is widely known that obesity is responsible for different kind of disease like cardiovascular disease, diabetes, etc. There are many cases around the world where children suffer from these types of diseases just because they are obese. For instance, in Nepal rate diabetes has increased in obese children. And even after knowing the consequences of obesity if parents let their children become obese then they should be punished.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed the reasons why parents should be punished and criminally charged if they let their children become obese. Obesity has dangerous negative effect but can be easily stopped and onus lies on the parents to stop their children from being obese.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ould be punished and criminally charged where as some people think otherwise. This essay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50277560507 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7511112421 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411658379093 0.242375264174 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173082212193 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972595070695 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294404428116 0.151781067708 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545072283 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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