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Region affecting the person's success

Essay topics: Region affecting the person's success

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Over the past few years, there is an ongoing debate between people about how the region affects the people's success. Some people believe that the region where the person is living had a significant impact on their success; while others maintain a view, that region does not play any role in person's success. This essay will discuss how the region plays a major role in person's success.
To begin with, region plays an important role in person's success. A person's native region can affect the person's leadership, teamwork, social skills, character, opinion, attitude, education, profession, and passion. The availability of modern education tools and up-to-date study resource will help person to get good education and his character will build. Thus, native region with a modern education system will help a person to achieve good career. Therefore, government should notice the importance of education in person's success.

On the other hand, people argue that it required determination, clear vision on goals, and proper guidance to achieve success in life. Family and friends surrounded us play a crucial role in influencing us; however, a strong determination will helps us to get success in life. An accomplished person will help their region to get name. Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg and Steve Jobs considered as best example who popularized their native region. These people serve as an inspiration to future generations. Hard work and persistence important to get success in life. Hence, to a small extent a native region will affect the person's success.
This essay had explained how a native region influence the person's success. In my opinion, native region plays a significant role in person's success because it helps to gain leadership and social skills, however, one must work hard and persistent irrespective on their situation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...people about how the region affects the peoples success. Some people believe that the r...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plays a major role in persons success. To begin with, region plays an important...
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Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: A person; Persons
...s an important role in persons success. A persons native region can affect the persons le...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... A persons native region can affect the persons leadership, teamwork, social skills, ch...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...s; however, a strong determination will helps us to get success in life. An accomplis...
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Line 4, column 391, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'as the best'.
Suggestion: as the best
...rk Zuckerberg and Steve Jobs considered as best example who popularized their native re...
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Line 4, column 621, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... extent a native region will affect the persons success. This essay had explained how...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ained how a native region influence the persons success. In my opinion, native region p...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istent irrespective on their situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28911564626 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69660112784 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513605442177 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4684095327 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 6.9802955665 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446184150669 0.242375264174 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182655062368 0.0925447433944 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117092138131 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323087050483 0.151781067708 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607466942206 0.0609392437508 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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