A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking washing and other household uses Why do many countries face water shortages and what could be done to alleviate the problem | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses.
Why do many countries face water shortages, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?

Nowadays lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses has become a growing problem across the globe. This leads to water shortages in many countries which is a severe issue due to water being an essential resource for every life. This essay will reveal the main reasons for the problem and suggest some possible solutions to it.

One of the major reasons for the water lacking problem is that people tend to use water mindlessly in their daily life. It is pretty common that individuals doing, let's say, hand washing of dishes allow water to run into the tube during the entire washing cycle. As a result, water consumption keeps growing and it becomes not only an expensive but also a limited resource. To solve the problem, government can execute a social program to ensure water economy dishwashing machines for every household.

Another notable reason is the global warming which in turn leads to an increased water evaporation all around the world. Consequently, fresh water reserves are getting exhausted. Although this issue affects all countries across the globe more severe consequences are faced by countries located closer to the equator, like counties in the central and the Northern Africa. To mitigate the problem, governments of the countries all over the Earth should start leaning closer to a so called "greenway" as the only viable solution to slow down the global warming effect and consequently resolve the problem with exhaustion of the fresh water reserves.

To sum up, although water lacking is becoming a serious and a growing problem for the entire Earth it has a number of obvious reasons that undoubtedly can be resolved. Governments should take lead dealing with the problems otherwise situation with the water lacking will be getting worse over the time.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12457912458 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66344225697 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3494177471 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421802826141 0.242375264174 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153483503012 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933171459848 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267120236643 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770956438174 0.0609392437508 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments