Should parents be legally held responsible for their child's behavior?
In this ever advancing era, developments can be seen happening cosmically, however debatable side of many of these advancements has now become controversial. Some masses deem that parents should legally held responsible for their child's act, while others contradict their claim. The following exposition will further elaborate my views on this concern.
At the outset, there are a plethora of reasons to support my viewpoints, but most importantly, parents is a first teacher of their child and they teach all entire moral and ethical values to their kid as well as good discipline. Then after, there is no denying of the fact is that offspring is a mirror image of their parents, while kids show there bad habit law can question them to parents. Along with this, In sometime parents can use abusive words in home, while child can listen these words and same in do socially , parents should responsible.
Probing ahead, it is equally true that parents should not provide smart phones to their children's in short age because social networking can do bad impact on kids behavior as well as they watch movies and serial that is very bad for growing children. Furthermore, a parent has full control over the child and if he does something wrong, then parents should be charged.
To recapitulate, by contemplating all the facts together, I would like to say that holding parents should be responsible for their child's act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...masses deem that parents should legally held responsible for their childs act, while...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sten these words and same in do socially , parents should responsible. Probing ...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y bad for growing children. Furthermore, a parent has full control over the child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00843881857 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68695097262 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5256139108 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.888888889 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421638970786 0.242375264174 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169505234993 0.0925447433944 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146395237937 0.071462118173 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267573674859 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674911125731 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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