Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. Advantages and disadvantages ?
<p class="MsoNormal">Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of
people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day
reveals effect of celebrity lifestyles on youngsters has been one of the
prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always held some
conflicting views about this. This essay will discuss both sides of the
argument.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On the one hand, I would like to say that today numerous youngsters
follow to celebrities like, sports and movie stars as their role model. Youth follows
them blindly and considered them as their idol. Moreover, the fame of any
superstar depends on their hard work, constancy, fortunes, and uniqueness shown
by individual for society. Furthermore, Sportsmen motivate the youth to take
part in sports which is good for individual physically as well as mentally
health. It is a good sign for youngsters to understand their passion and follow
them with full dedication.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On the dark side, along with many advantages, there are some
consequences too. Famous people displaying negativity can mislead young people
of our society like many movie stars endorse in cigarette and alcohol brands. Numerous
popular individual are notable for their lavish style, rather than their
achievement which results to a negative example for the youth. David backhem is
the best example for youth who have demonstrated his glamour’s life.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">To sum up, I believe that the youth should be smart enough
to select their role models. I don’t think that sports and actors prove to be
good role models as they have more of a negative influence on young than
positive.</p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76865671642 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.21910494225 2.71678728327 155% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2660793972 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.12807881773 533% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23054353533 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855307608747 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660903521768 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661471253663 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648299073179 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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