Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. Advantages and disadvantages ?
In this ever advancing era, development can be seen happening comically, be it in the social, political or economical aspect. The debate surrounding effect of celebrity lifestyles on youngsters which is earlier debatable has now become controversial. However, This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, I would like to say that today numerous youngsters follow to celebrities like, sports and movie stars as their role model. Youth follows them blindly and considered them as their idol. Moreover, the fame of any superstar depends on their hard work, constancy, fortunes, and uniqueness shown by individual for society. Furthermore, Sportsmen motivate the youth to take part in sports which is good for individual physically as well as mentally health. It is a good sign for youngsters to understand their passion and follow them with full dedication.
On the dark side, along with many advantages, there are some consequences too. Famous people displaying negativity can mislead young people of our society like many movie stars endorse in cigarette and alcohol brands. Numerous popular individuals are notable for their lavish style, rather than their achievement which results to a negative example for the youth. David backhem is the best example for youth who have demonstrated his glamour’s life.
To sum up, I believe that the youth should be smart enough to select their role models. I don’t think that sports and actors prove to be good role models as they have more of a negative influence on young than positive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21825396825 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7989752426 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.168493626 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268968623317 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824703781331 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672019250447 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140811679242 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071676877693 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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