Should parents be legally held responsible for their child's behavior ?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals parents should be legally responsible for their child's behaviour has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always held some conflicting views about this. I will scrutinize my view points in subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, I would like to say that parents are first teacher of their child's they teach all ethical values to their juveniles. Moreover, a parent has full control over the child and if he does something wrong, then parents should be charged. Furthermore, a kid is the mirror image of his parents and it is them who have given him life, basic morals, ethics value and etiquettes etcetera. So child represent his parents in the society.
Probing ahead, it is equally true that over-pampering and handling the stubbornness of the child or concealing his wrong deeds or favouring beyond what is required, too result he evolving into a spoilt brat. Then after, some of the behavioural traits are innate, so upon acknowledging them at early stages of life. Also, parents must be alert enough to manage example, angle and rude behaviour.
To sum up, it is parents duty to exercise reasonable care, protection and control over minor children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02252252252 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74846025321 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689189189189 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5518677272 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9166666667 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313730853647 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098896174057 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109901888281 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152991453014 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095368562675 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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