Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city centers. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis, and metro on vehicle free days.To what extent do you think advantages o

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Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city centers. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis, and metro on vehicle free days.
To what extent do you think advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

nowadays, there is a trends where people are encouraged to use public transportation instead private cards, trucks and motorcycles, which attached numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. it can be agreed that using public transportation has advantages overweigh to disadvantages, whereas some people think contrary. this essay will elaborate both sides and thus lead to conclusion.

At the outset, more vehicles on road can greatly contribute to higher pollution. To consider this fact, using public transport can have bright side, which can have direct impact on reduction on pollution levels. At cite an example, London declared their vehicle free day on 23rd September 2013, and nowadays their neighboring countries are also adopting this phenomenon and encouraging their citizens to follow this. Therefore, it has advantages on both aspects including pollution as well as saving fuel cost.

Nevertheless, some communities hold the opposing view for this trend and they believed it can't have advantages even it creates kiosk for everyone and has the burden to manage public transport for that day. As per recent survey conducted by TIO newspaper resulted, it reduced pollution by 65% in a day cities like Delhi. By this way, it is beneficial for all including governments as well as individuals.

Agglomerating all points above, it can be concluded that using public transport has plethora of advantages overweigh to disadvantages, as per my viewpoint vehicle free day has myriads of benefits in for everyone along with governments, public, and pollution levels.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47368421053 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00900428234 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.521064379 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255622192779 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870756268262 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636710183857 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154196258112 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411681417765 0.0609392437508 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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