Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?

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Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?

there is no denying that nowadays, people travel around the world for a plethora of purposes, such as business, as a tourist, and to visit family and friends, some people believes when law change human behavior also change, on the other hand some argues for this and they believe human behavior always behave same and it doesn't matter the location. this essay will discuss how law changes trigger human behavior and why it happen.

Firstly, we all agree, human mind gets alert whenever we found something different from our daily life, these are the main factor where mind, try to understand new things and change whenever people visit to new a country. there are numerous of studies which claims how human behavior automatically adopt the rules and regulations as per the location.

Secondly, as myriads of human understand and respect other social and culture values, in this order human behavior try to understand another cultures and social values. nowadays, when people travel to other countries beforehand they understand and read that country cultural and social values so that they can easily adjust them in that location.

this essay discussed how law change affects human behavior. As per my prospective, changing human behavior as per country change is a positive turn towards to adopt new cultural and social values of that area.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 31.9359605911 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11312217195 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39743008534 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1723492306 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293704270398 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156307004233 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889358343889 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190157916616 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878359197336 0.0609392437508 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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