In some countries, the number of shooting massacres is on the rise because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is always said that, lack of kindness or love in dealing with any situations could always lead to problems for the society or surroundings. This corrupts one's mind to destroy the neighbors or the people surrounding them. One such example is the increase in shooting massacres due to ownership of guns by some people through illegal means. This statement is strongly agreed and hence this essay talks about some of the catalysts and examples of increase in number of shooting massacres.
Firstly, a person having this must be either a powerful legal authority or a terrorist or a criminal. Many underworld organizations are involved in manufacturing these guns who supplies to people by charging hefty prizes. Most of the criminals get this illegally and threatens innocent people.
Also, many such unlawful guns are imported to different countries through smugglers and they are supplied to the criminals against laws and norms. These factors have been increased in recent days due to the growth of the firms who manufactures these machinery without proper rights.
One such example is, in recent Mumbai terror attacks, some of the terrorists have massively shoot many innocent people in public places and even children were the victims of such incidents. Also, in United states, some anonymous persons have killed many innocent people in social places of Texas and Boston. Not only these countries, but also other countries had become pray for such guns.
To some up, every governments are taking more actions and steps and had toughen their borders in-order to eradicate such massive supply of guns to its people. But it could be controlled only when an individual holding such guns keeps himself composed and he must restrict himself by owning such devils in hand. Society must always trains its people to be a good citizen which could only avoid such things in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: mind destroying
...ety or surroundings. This corrupts ones mind to destroy the neighbors or the people surrounding...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...agreed and hence this essay talks about some of the catalysts and examples of increase in n...
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Suggestion:
...in manufacturing these guns who supplies to people by charging hefty prizes. Most...
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Message: Did you mean 'this machinery' or 'these machineries'?
Suggestion: this machinery; these machineries
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...le is, in recent Mumbai terror attacks, some of the terrorists have massively shoot many in...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'shot'.
Suggestion: shot
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'toughened'.
Suggestion: toughened
...e taking more actions and steps and had toughen their borders in-order to eradicate suc...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'toughened'.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...izen which could only avoid such things in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11003236246 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54089621596 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7772804934 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.266666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20737774971 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724329770063 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594533537977 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113378445868 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067480214114 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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