Some organization integrate employees in decision making process for their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this
Now in the modern era, their are lots of company and organization which hire the employees in decision making process for their good and services. The integrate more employees is very big advantage for company because the work divided into more parts and also complete fastly. But one side effect of this thing is more numbers of employees the company give more money which is the not benefits for company.
On the one hand, in decision making process of their services and good company integrated the employees. So, every one have work so it is the very good because the unemployment was decreasing day by day due to this method. The person who are well educated they can do this jobs for company and company pays very good salary to those employees who work very hard or good. And, those who gave the benefits for company.
On the other hand, there is one loss to hire the more employees for company. They pay salary to everyone which is the main big disadvantage for organization. In decision making there are not require more employees for goods and services.
To recapitulate, every coin has to side and this topic is also contain a both side. All companies want achieve great success with help to more employees. While more employees is also a big disadvantage for organization.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
Now in the modern era, their are lots of company and organization wh...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ng process for their good and services. The integrate more employees is very big advantage fo...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...ation. In decision making there are not require more employees for goods and services. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore employees for goods and services. To recapitulate, every coin has to side ...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...coin has to side and this topic is also contain a both side. All companies want achieve...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccess with help to more employees. While more employees is also a big disadvantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77678571429 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52738508792 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7329836057 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3076923077 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378156279318 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15386327642 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131102376521 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239619608539 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901692985674 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
Now in the modern era, their are lots of company and organization wh...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ng process for their good and services. The integrate more employees is very big advantage fo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...ation. In decision making there are not require more employees for goods and services. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore employees for goods and services. To recapitulate, every coin has to side ...
^^^
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...coin has to side and this topic is also contain a both side. All companies want achieve...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccess with help to more employees. While more employees is also a big disadvantag...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77678571429 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52738508792 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7329836057 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3076923077 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378156279318 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15386327642 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131102376521 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239619608539 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901692985674 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.