Some people argue Law changes human behaviour whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it?
Nowadays, the effect of law on human behaviour has becoem a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "does it change the behaviour?" Although rules are not regarded as thoroughly both positive and constructive by many individuals, I tend to believe the opposite.
From an educational point of view, the legislative change is indeed bound up tightly with educational achievements, which it might lead to both intellectual developments and educational reforms. For example, a group of profound educationalists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between successful students and education system as well as achieving high scores. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that academic background is correlated positively with not only imposing rules but also progress.
In social terms, enforcing regulations is undoubtedly attributable to social reforms, in that it would lead to security, order and law. A well-known example of such attributions is committing crimes, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken to take prisons for granted. Had they deterred citizens from criminals in advance, it might have had the opportunity to ensure security. Thus, introducing laws could play an imperative role in bringing safety to the society.
To recapitulate, I tend to believe law could change aggressive behaviours. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ct of law on human behaviour has becoem a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67611336032 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31604898808 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688259109312 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8270005084 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161171947297 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516544330003 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490527631257 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951162983838 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579858194898 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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