Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Recently, the phenomenon of space explorations and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that these researches are highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that sending ruckets and satellites can be a plus, and I will analyze it throughout this essay.
From the sociological standpoint, finding other life outer the earth can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that alternative location, as well as detecting aliens, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered protecting the earth from dangers. Thus, beneficial ramifications of new technologies and another living place for the future apparently can bee seen.
Within the realm of psychological science, wasting time and money might increase the consequences of searching in various aspects of outer space. Moreover, fundamental aspects of poor eduaction pertain to this reality that the demerits of third world countries and developing countries pertain to poor sanitation. As a tangible example, scientific research undertaken by a prestigious univeristy has asserted that the downside of more important issuein the earth is correlated negatively with human primary needs. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of helping African children.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of expanding human knowledge far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of solving immediate problems prove the significance of it, but also pinpoint earth problems implications.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, third, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68888888889 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1650006447 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692592592593 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4986282347 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180345983794 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519945442803 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594360578185 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884151112927 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335102046842 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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