Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In this fast moving world we come across many kind of people with diverse opinions about topic like space exploration and it benefits and disadvantages. A class of or a group of people think that space exploration will help humanity and in future is will serve us, but there is also a class of people who thinks other way round and think that if we spend those money on grim problems we are facing now will actaully server humanity. I personally agree with both the view, as it has its own benefits.
Firslty, the people who believe that exploring outer space will benefit humanity in future are on right path, the benefits of space explorations are reallly great and we should look towards it as an investement than considering this as an expenses. For example, our life has become so easy due to GPS system, now to reach anywhere we simply user GPS and it saves lots of effors and cost. Therefore, I personally think we should keep on doing space explorating and invent and find out more and more such things which will help us in future.
Secondly, some people believes that we should not waste money on space exploration and utilise the same money for solving immediate problems we are facing on earth.
To some extend, I agree with this point as well. If we just keep spending on outer space and neglect our own earth it is going to be worst case in furture. There are so many problem we are facing on earth like global warming and pollution. We should also look at these problem very serieously.
To conclude, I would say that, if we balance between money spent on outer space and on earth, we will be having bright future for sure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...n this fast moving world we come across many kind of people with diverse opinions about t...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...er way round and think that if we spend those money on grim problems we are facing now will...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an expense' or simply 'expenses'?
Suggestion: an expense; expenses
...an investement than considering this as an expenses. For example, our life has become so ea...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and more such things which will help us in future. Secondly, some people believes that...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...oblems we are facing on earth. To some extend, I agree with this point as well. If we...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the worst'.
Suggestion: be the worst
...nd neglect our own earth it is going to be worst case in furture. There are so many prob...
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Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... be worst case in furture. There are so many problem we are facing on earth like global warm...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...orst case in furture. There are so many problem we are facing on earth like global warm...
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Line 6, column 263, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...g and pollution. We should also look at these problem very serieously. To conclude, I woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55218855219 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35433722846 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2208121401 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299990708537 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107445213718 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105337986835 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182949142587 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796591419689 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.1260098522 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.