Some people believe that human behavior can be changed by laws; others argue that laws have little effect on human behavior. Which opinion do you agree with? Please explain.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is considering laws and regulations as an integral part of changing human's lives. There is a widespread worry that some stringent rules can cause adverse impacts on people's future. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are numerous arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks for the laws and regulations, people can carefully avoid their mistakes and offenses due to the strict rules because it will cause to longtime jail, serious punishments, and high penalties. Not only will this control human from misleading actions, but they can convert a bad people to a good and invaluable citizen to the society. Needless to say, these merits stand people in good stead as far as making their lives prospect and creating a peaceful country with vital people.
Another pivotal argument is future generation need to practice to follow their school rules and policies, so it will continuously happen and after several years younger generation will be a great and advisable person for the world.
In vie of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks the benefits and contribution of regulations and laws to alter humans' behaviour indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat thanks for the laws and regulations, people can carefully avoid their mistake...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice following'.
Suggestion: practice following
...l argument is future generation need to practice to follow their school rules and policies, so it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14485981308 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74229002818 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6290074404 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170960986787 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672607353108 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385486363857 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101652989563 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544045053572 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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