Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree/disagree?
The basic difference between developed and developing countries is law and order in public in this world. The onus of benefits lie on people of country which way they accept these laws. Some people believe that law has myriad effect on societies and other argue that law can not alter people. I am inclined with notion believing in significant influences of law in our life. I will discuss both positive and negative views and give a logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are myriad impact which has apt effect in our lives. Laws and order in any categories such as sports, defense, all private and government sector play a pivotal role to manage activities smoothly. For example public places such as park, bus stop, stations etc are being used by public. Due to fine in place some people follow standards and make clean after using these places. If we secede these fine norms then their will be huge garbage on every place. In this direction, law impose us to make clean our environment.
Secondly, developed countries people are obliged with laws for education, safety and many more rights. People become more trusty to each other. with proper law, people have more trade, sports and many more deals. In deficit of law and order in societies, people get violence in all activity. Laws are become to reserve right of individual either it is education or live or equality to use resources of nature. This way laws create humanity only and didn't create any trouble in daily life.
Ultimately, aforementioned views are benefits to societies and laws are apt way to achieve success. I would recommend, people come forward and accept law for humanity to get high living and education standard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89547038328 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45196665755 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3102028757 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9473684211 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221831659083 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694743198871 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582458488438 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141468568441 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474362003977 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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