Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Celebrities often not meet with general public in society, but they of course do have delicate link to art or fame in their life. Mass media like newspapers, magazines, television and others are outlook for presenting their view in terms of link to general public. Some people believe that news paper should not scrutiny celebrity's life and other argue in notion to intervene in the privacy of their personal moment. In this essay, shall discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
Firstly, celebrities are persona personnel of any countries have right to live, right to travel across their vicinity. People linked with cinemas, dramas or working for fame are precious person to countries itself. People are striven for personal glimpse in any situation and here mass media plays a pivotal role. For example, there are myriad and multifarious advertisement which circulates in mass-media. Mass media provides and shares all personal moments and behave like eavesdrop to their secrets to claim money in terms of TRP.
Secondly, there are some channels, newspaper and magazines which come forward and leak celebrity's personal moment to gain eye in public. Although they breach all boundaries to set financial target. People argue and believe that personal moments relieve by newspaper secede the distance between a fans and their charming start. Newspapers and magazines often leak their secrets.
In recapitulate, there are strong facts discussed for this argument. In my personal opinion, mass-media should not intervene into personal life of starts. I believe they have a big role in development of nations in terms of morale of country. I will recommend people should be reiterate with discipline and etiquette.
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...ntry. I will recommend people should be reiterate with discipline and etiquette.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31654676259 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64290345411 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571942446043 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6006992922 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118251341006 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450070595754 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463082902665 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793658048685 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415488175513 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.