Some people believe laws can change human behavior. Do you agree with this statement?
There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of imposing laws as thoroughly positive and constructive, while there are also a number of people who hold an opponents’ view whereas I am inclined to believe that imposing laws change human perception and behavior. I will discuss my viewpoint in the coming paragraphs.
There are several reasons why imposing law is advantageous for a society. First of all, it is argued that the fear of being punished plays a pivotal role in the way people behave and it may further be attributed by the fact that knowing the possibilities of different penalties, people will be compelled to constantly remind themselves about the harmful consequences of breaking laws, so that they become more accountable and responsible about their actions. For example, the defamation law is highly regarded as a fundamental right to protect the reputation of individuals and organizations.
In addition, it is also claimed that imposing laws could enormously and constructively shape our perception about having a positive life. This is to say that legislation inevitably leads people to think about the consequences of their actions, therefore, it might specialize some characteristics in people which might stimulate them to acquire positive outcome in their personal and professional life. For example, in Malaysia, the government has imposed a high tax on alcoholic beverages which has consequently led to a low consumption of these beverages.
In conclusion, the aforementioned discussion on the topic propounds that imposing law is beneficial for individuals and organizations. However, it is recommended that authorities should introduce regulated laws to avoid human rights violations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31580819455 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7678591446 50.4703680194 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.4 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.25397266985 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179782892682 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605771656348 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573600358294 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108047715876 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483026226928 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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