Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss.
Recently, the phenomenon of the main goal of educational system is making qualified employees and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this idea is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and ppositive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that this issue can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages of completeing educational curriculum in order to be fully prepared for getting jobs. These benefits are rooted in the fact of prosperity. From mu own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the merits of the knowledge that pupils get in their education and its effects on their their conditions working. Firstly, the people who have academic degrees are relatively qualified for doing their tasks. Hence, a great deal amount of time and money is saved annually because companies are not forced to train them. Furthermore, the rate of faults will be diminished by hiring the graduated people because they are instructed in their courses and being sophisticated.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, some other settlers believe that the essential target of higher education is expanding and developing the science. According to research undertaken by a prestigious university, governments have an array of schemes in order to engage the academic dwellers in scientific programs by funding and investing on crucial issues.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the most significant aim of higher education is enhancing the efficiency in companies by employing knowledgeable citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: their
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45126353791 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07247153367 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4881439224 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174777949906 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559614200997 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512042463776 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936213529886 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113046321532 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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