Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, others claim it has made us more knowledgeable. Discuss both opinions and example
Recently, a debate on the digital age and its advantages has sparked an ongoing controversy, proponents believe it is beneficial for the society, whereas opponents think otherwise and suggested that it is making us dumb and impacting lives around the world. This essay will illustrate both sides of the arguments.
To begin with, in today’s world, it is irrefutable to ignore the technological advancement and its impact on the society, use of technology has certainly made us dependent and lazy but it has drastically changed the human history. Technology is a backbone of the modern world and used in many areas like transportation, communication, war, entertainment and education etc.
For example, nowadays, it is hard to believe the life without mobile and computers, which are the gift of technology.
Further, technology certainly has demerits as well, humans are becoming dependent and suffering from many health issues. Studies show more than 70% of kids in the USA and other developed countries have eyesight problems as they spend most of their productive time in front of the mobile or computer screen.
To sum up, technology has certainly helped humans with extraordinary inventions and made our life easier, but it is creating problems as well. In my view, it is an individual’s discretion to use the technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29439252336 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16654560881 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1758771648 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.888888889 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107147860346 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355992029645 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356690501085 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491041043649 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328012261571 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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