Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Keeping pets nowadays has become increasingly popular especially with people to kill their loneliness. Some people are of the opinion that only those who can take proper care of pets must be allowed to keep them, whereas others argue that it depends on one's perception of caring and this should not be enforced. This essay will describe why only people who can take care after their pets must be allowed to keep them.
Pets must be considered a part of one's family but in most cases this is not happening. For instance, a survey states approximately 65% of pets are not fed properly leading toe a decline in their life expectancy rates when compared to the same species in the outside world. This survey is in itself a strong indicator of why one needs to be accountable to their pets.
Most of the times pets are bought for killing boredom and not with the intention of taking proper care. For example, if a person buys parrots it is just for his entertainment and he does not pay attention to his food requirements. This has led to the pets becoming more lonely and weak when compared to their counterparts in the outside world.
Unless and until a person is not ready to take proper care of the pet they must not be allowed to keep them. This essay has described the reasons why a proper register needs to be maintained for all the pet keepers whicch must be followed by periodic checking on teir standards.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...heir counterparts in the outside world. Unless and until a person is not ready to take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56692913386 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4742959088 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.078010557 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.454545455 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40074613416 0.242375264174 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171484517446 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127861163051 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25092132107 0.151781067708 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121228618523 0.0609392437508 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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