Although some people get pets as a company in order not to feel loneliness, they don't look after them as they should. While some people think that they should keep their animals anyway, others believe that they shouldn't be allowed. This essay will discuss why people that mistreat their pets shouldn't be allowed to do so.
To begin with, in the last years with the developing of technology, people doesn't meet as much as before, and they become to feel lonely. Subsequently, the number of pet owners is growing, as the number of complains about animal abuse. Animals are beings with rights and should be respected as any other living being. For example, in United States, there are laws that look after animals and who do not obey them, can go to jail.
Furthermore, if a person is abusing an animal, it shows that she or he, probably has a mental illness and could be dangerous to other humans as well. Neighbours should report to authorities any sights of animal violence in their neighbourhoods. Therefore, authorities should take action and prevent these people to have pets or anyone else under they care and give this animals in adoption.
To sum up, there are lots of people who don't look after their animals as they were their children. In my opinion, animals are beings with rights and there should be worldwide laws to be able to look after them. As a result, authorities should take pets away in certain cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75502008032 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.400141929 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558232931727 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9513807338 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0769230769 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328399877422 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121841672062 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669506212401 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210199423823 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644383550486 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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