The extension of the cities around the world are growing becoming a huge problem. Some people believe that this problem should be solved by constructing vertical cities, while others think that they should be horizontal. This essay will discuss why it would be a solution to build vertical cities.
To begin with, it is an effective way to give a solution to this problem by building vertical cities. Vertical cities allow to distribute people in a way that green areas and park can be created. For example, China having the highest population in the world, has built some cities in a vertical way, surrounded by parks and lakes. As a result, although people are agglomerated in flats, they have fulfilling views that bring them peace and calm.
On the other hand, some people think that is better to develop a horizontal architecture. What they are not aware of, is the space that this would require, and how difficult it would be not only to distribute the resources such as, water and electricity, but to have recreational and green areas to rest.
To sum up, more and more areas are being covered by new buildings, which is resulting in a significant problem. In my opinion, architects should design a vertical urbanization so as, resources can be distributed in a better way, as well as having green restful spaces for the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'distributing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: distributing
... vertical cities. Vertical cities allow to distribute people in a way that green areas and pa...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a vertical way" with adverb for "vertical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ion in the world, has built some cities in a vertical way, surrounded by parks and lakes. As a re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84347826087 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70071054153 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552173913043 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3335268533 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.25397266985 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176558452374 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744134218193 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517764153359 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106117639627 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619691603169 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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