• Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, people all over the world have become more health conscious than ever before. Owing to which, they are paying more attention to their eating habits and exercise. While some progressively adore the ideology that good health cannot be achieved by a healthy diet, others undoubtedly despise it and favour that exercise is the key to a fit body. This essay will prudently discuss both views, to persuade how nutritious food plays a vital role in the wellbeing of a person.
On the one hand, nutritious food offers many clear benefits. To begin with, it gives us necessary nutrition to stay fit and fine, which are essential for the complete body, including skin, hair, bones etcetera. Additionally, it keeps us away from many diseases such as malnutrition, weakness etcetera. For example, deficiency of Calcium and Vitamins leads to bones and skin related problems. Moreover, it is indispensable because it gives us the energy to perform our daily grinds. Without a healthy diet, we would feel feeble and not able to perform our daily tasks. Therefore, it can be said that a healthy diet is critical to a person’s health.
On the other hand, it is believed that exercising is necessary for our health. Undoubtedly, it keeps us fit, active, increases blood circulation in our body and boosts our energy levels. Nevertheless, exercising itself requires stamina in the body, which can only be achieved by a good and balanced diet.
In conclusion, after looking at both point of view, I radically agree and feel that a balanced diet is more beneficial than a physical workout. Finally, I would suggest that everyone should eat a balanced diet, including a perfect ratio of nutrients and minerals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06007067138 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77225539814 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3926774693 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258701021736 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706034994058 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629478833744 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150065795804 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690181780606 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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