Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Human behavior is always affected by various factors. Majority of masses opine that law alter their behavior. They feel that law have significant impact on their traits. In my perspective, I also assert that law has preponderant impact on them. This essay will discuss my view in detail.
It is fact, when government made some rules in order to provide comfort to their denizens, it significantly impact on them. Traffic rules for example, have made by the government in all the nations. These rules are abided by everyone because of the fear of punishment by the government.
This fear was not possible during the time when the rules for the traffic were not imposed. In those days, denizens prefer to neglect the traffic congestion. They did not pay any attention on this. They always parked their motor- vehicles on the roads which caused traffic congestion. But, nowadays, the scenario is different; they give preference to the traffic rules imposed by the public figures. Since the implementation of rules, the traffic congestion has reduced. A recent survey reveals that all the denizens park their automobiles in the parking. Thereby, accident on roads has also reduced.
Thus, it is possible to agree that law changes the human behavior. As in ancient time, people parked their vehicles on roads without caring about others, but because of traffic law, nowadays they park their vehicles in the parking area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07264957265 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57258213274 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4858874912 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9444444444 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.9669160288 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133030170612 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497470711687 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972877431606 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096037098622 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086814790158 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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