People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Academic institutions play significant role in one’s life. In this regard, some experts assert that pupils go to these institutions so that they could get knowledge, and they could build their career. In my opinion, academic institutions are visited by pupils in order to build relations with other mates, and also they go there to get vast knowledge.
The first reason why pupils go to colleges and universities is that they seek to interact socially with the other pupils. Firstly, it is very arduous for one to spend whole life alone. Therefore, they attend colleges and universities so that they could be in relation with someone. Pupils always seek to do entertainment with others also. In most of the countries, they entertained themselves when they are in the company of their friends. For instance, when I passed secondary education, I was ready to go to university because I was in need of trustworthy friend in order to enjoy my life.
The second reason is that people go to academic institutions so that they could improve their management skills. These skills can only be enhanced when a person interact with qualified and experienced docents who are available in these institutions only. Moreover, a one needs learning methodologies to acquire these skills which can easily be found in these institutions only. For example, when I was in need to learn new methods to solve computer assembling problems, I joined an institution where such education was being delivered.
At the end, although some believe colleges and universities are visited to get knowledge and to build career, I think these are visited by the pupils so that they could make friends and could get knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ys seek to do entertainment with others also. In most of the countries, they enterta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07117437722 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84090099369 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508896797153 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7621272802 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152159166927 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563130733517 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568945281252 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093752093075 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633099342998 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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